You did a decent job. I like how you added death scenes, but make sure that you don't just copy and paste the movieclip you use to play because you can walk around in the death scenes.
that my bad i cant do crap with programing so while i re-arted the game i accidently use a MC not a Grafic
The intro was wayyyyy too long. Other than that, maybe improve the graphics a little on the targets.
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